Hey guys check out my poem

[250EXstud]

Hey guys i had to right a poem of love for english tell me what you think.


My love is like a summer breeze
Soft calm and cool
When i look into your eyes i freeze
To not love you i would be a fool.

My love is like a new 4 wheeler
Its's bright new and fast
So happy like you get before you go to the dealer
To see a Honda 450R at last.

[Narly R]

Im so proud of you! that made a tear drip from my eye!:D

But my writting teacher better be readdy cause Im a rapper just dyin to get it on paper! i really wanna write poems about 4-wheelers!!!


Ill share them ALL with you guys!;) :D

[Nausty]

not me, I hate english.

But I can't write them so i'll post my favorite one cuz i'm bored.

In Flanders Fields

In Flanders fields the poppies blow
Between the crosses, row on row,
That mark our place; and in the sky
The larks, still bravely singing, fly
Scarce heard amid the guns below.


We are the Dead. Short days ago
We lived, felt dawn, saw sunset glow,
Loved, and were loved, and now we lie
In Flanders fields.


Take up our quarrel with the foe:
To you from failing hands we throw
The torch; be yours to hold it high.
If ye break faith with us who die
We shall not sleep, though poppies grow
In Flanders fields.

imo poems are dumb.

im dumb too.

that must be why.

[Sportrax10]

What grade are you in?

Do you plan on getting the TRX450R when it comes out?

[Narly R]

I just like messin around rymin... and when its about quads its even better!


Im not talkin about like.....

we sat in the feild, our love was as strong as a sheild,
as we grew closer, I realized he was groser,
now what i have, will not be healed,......


I dunno thats gay but I like cool ones there fun...:ermm: :)

[250EXstud]

I am a freshman. Umm i am goin to race my 400 next season and probably around next september i will get a new 450

[trx400ex]

Personally i would have used to see a YFZ450 at last:p :eek: