stepping up

[D-4our]

Hey, check out this sonnet/poem I had to write in 6th period. It's kinda corny but I think it pretty much sums up what alot of us go through when jumping somethin bigger than weve ever jumped before/ stepping it up.

hhmmhm.... Stepping-Up

My breath is short because of this great fear.
I have to do it so I feel better.
I know the time to jump is very near.
I have to get as good as Jon Guetter.:D

If I do not, my future is shattered.
I have looked at it thirty times over.
yes i might crash and get bruised and battered,
To give myself luck I hold a clover (not really)

The time has come I'm beggining to sweat.
My quad can do it but can I? I ask.
Fears set aside I'm all ready and set.
I charge at the jump and destroy the task.

This feeling of releif just lifts me up.
This is the true meaning of stepping up.

.....kinda lame but I think it deserves an A-

[JUSTINcredible]

thats good!! alot better than i can do

[D-4our]

Thank you, thank you. I like the very last part best.

[blondie69]

whoa! dude! thats really good! :eek:

[cody anderson]

I wrote a peom about MX in the 8th grade, I read it in front of my teacher and the class... my teacher began to cry... I asked what was weong and she said "it was so honerable" even though she really did't know what MX was. Right on dude. I'll try to find mine.

[blondie69]

Originally posted by cody anderson
"it was so honerable"


at 1st i thought u said that she was cryin cuz it was so horrible:p

[CHAUNCY]

Better than I could have done. Good job. Do you have a bigger pic of your avater by any chance ???

[D-4our]

thax guys and girl. You can find a bigger picture in ********.com

[hessianmx111]

Originally posted by CHAUNCY
Better than I could have done. Good job. Do you have a bigger pic of your avater by any chance ???

he may not but i do:muscle:

[CHAUNCY]

Originally posted by D-4our
You can find a bigger picture in ********.com

Alright, thanks.

[CHAUNCY]

Originally posted by hessianmx111
he may not but i do:muscle:

Cool, now I dont have to go searching.

[Honda4trax250x]

man i suck at poetry

[Narly R]

The last parts cool!!!! If I right a poem all let yall know!!!! Im the best rapper up in here!!!!!!!!:devil :blah :huh

[QuAdRaCeR244]

that is better than me. i will have to find some of them poets i have done:eek2:

[BaD_250ex]

Roses are Red.
Violets are Blue.
Sugar is Neat.
And So is Glue.


Thank you thank you, took me all night on that one.
:D

[Glow Plug]

awsome :D



lmao pretty good peom bad :D

[BaD_250ex]

Thanks man, Ill try to come up with some new one.


O ya, Very Shibby peom D-4our

[BaD_250ex]

Thanks man



Sorry about the man comment, just a natural reaction.:rolleyes:

[Glow Plug]

Originally posted by BaD_250ex
Sorry about the man comment, just a natural reaction.:rolleyes:

wtf are you talking about for the last time i am not a chick :grr

That was the best and I mean the best poem i have ever heard!

The part where you said "destroy the task" was awesome.. destroy was a cool word to use.

Do a search and look for my funny quad rhyme .. it sucks but its funny.

glow plug you changed your name but how do people not know still :confused: make an avatar "IM NOT A GIRL" :p :blah

and cody i thought you said horrible too lol

Good job nick. Hey i am on the school pc's right know hope you have fun in P.E lol