Need your opinion on my Entry for the SHIFT CONTEST

[BrianWrightR6]

All right you all I have been working on this design for the Shift contest (if you don’t know what it is then you can look here http://www.shiftracing.com/contest.php ) I have got one submission all ready in it and wanted to do something that would really stand out so this is what I came up with. I literally put blood, sweat, and tears into this. I am going to submit it but before I do I wanted you’re all’s opinion on it. Any comments, suggestions are welcome.

[zzbudzz]

looks like someone needs therapy?:confused2 .........j/k looks pretty neat.

[A4StrokeGuy]

where are the quads at?!?!?!?!

looks awsome

[BrianWrightR6]

Originally posted by A4StrokeGuy
where are the quads at?!?!?!?!

looks awsome

I looked all over for some good pictures of riders for SHIFT on quads and did not find any good ones. I will keep looking and add some before I submit it.

[QuadR8cer12]

I ant find the origional pic ofthis but here it is....... I cut out the background of it if you cn still use it:confused: He is wearing thor but just mark that out;)

[QuadR8cer12]

I found it!

[QuadR8cer12]

others.....

[BrianWrightR6]

Thanks allot "QuadR8cer12" I really don’t know where I could put the quads in it. It is all ready busy enough, but I will try.

[Doibugu2]

Brian, that is pretty cool. Job well done. I do have 1 comment. Its just too busy for the idiots in our industry. People don't like to have to think about an ad. Thats way they put a really hot chick with a small shift shirt on them.

When you send it, tell them your trying to buck the trend of "Sex Sells" Your trying to sell to a more intelligent buyer or something like that.

But again its F'n cool. Pat yourself on the back.

[QuadR8cer12]

here is one more.....

[QuadR8cer12]

One more:rolleyes:

[QuadR8cer12]

Originally posted by Doibugu2
Brian, that is pretty cool. Job well done. I do have 1 comment. Its just too busy for the idiots in our industry. People don't like to have to think about an ad. Thats way they put a really hot chick with a small shift shirt on them.

When you send it, tell them your trying to buck the trend of "Sex Sells" Your trying to sell to a more intelligent buyer or something like that.

But again its F'n cool. Pat yourself on the back. He did have one for the "sex sells' Part but they thought it was TOO sexy;)

[BrianWrightR6]

Originally posted by QuadR8cer12
He did have one for the "sex sells' Part but they thought it was TOO sexy;)


Yehh if any one want's it just PM me your e-mail address.

[QuadR8cer12]

Originally posted by BrianWrightR6
Yehh if any one want's it just PM me your e-mail address. They removed it from my thread"~~Ok Guys Its Time to Represent!!~~":eek2:

[tants]

Originally posted by BrianWrightR6
All right you all I have been working on this design for the Shift contest (if you don’t know what it is then you can look here http://www.shiftracing.com/contest.php ) I have got one submission all ready in it and wanted to do something that would really stand out so this is what I came up with. I literally put blood, sweat, and tears into this. I am going to submit it but before I do I wanted you’re all’s opinion on it. Any comments, suggestions are welcome.


that pic if very good. but you are supporting the dirtbikers. isnt it like between the bikes and quads? throw some quadpics in there and that pic will be amazing! good job on it tho

[Sportrax10]

It looks great so far, but def. put some quads in.

Maybe even give them a link to this page...

[BrianWrightR6]

This is my last rough draft......

[Glow Plug]

that looks awsome :D

[QuadR8cer12]

Nice , Its getting better and better man!Keep it up!!:devil

[Striker49]

Looks good man...im still tryin to figure out what to do. :ermm:

[xXx*PREDATOR*xXx]

Do you mind if I try and use some of those pics. that you posted?

[xXx*PREDATOR*xXx]

and ummmmm striker can I use your avatar?

[QuadR8cer12]

Originally posted by xXx*PREDATOR*xXx
Do you mind if I try and use some of those pics. that you posted? If your talking about the pics I posted go for it!;)

[Striker49]

Originally posted by xXx*PREDATOR*xXx
and ummmmm striker can I use your avatar?

Sure dude, its Dana pullin a superman. Just goto google.com and do an image search for Dana Creech and it should be the first image. :D



O yeah, second sumbission...but b4 i send it in, anything I should do to it? :confused:

[QuadR8cer12]

hmmmmmm mabye another quad or 2 somewhere doing another trick

[QuadR8cer12]

BTW,........ but good job!!;)

[D-4our]

im gonna draw that pic of creech but hes gonna be doing a holy man and wearing shift.

[QuadR8cer12]

Nice be sure to san it for us so we can see!!:devil

[D-4our]

no problem:cool:

[Striker49]

Hmmm....what is it lacking/what needs to be improved? I need suggestions here. :D



EDIT: Roost pic exchanged for still shot in upper right corner.

[Glow Plug]

striker looks awsome :D

[QuadR8cer12]

hmmmmmmm very nice..... Maybe instead ofa quad jut sitting there have a guy roosting around a corner??:devil

[mrusk]

Striker i'd get rid of the pic of the stock ex in the top right corner. Replace it with a freestyle pic.

matt

[Striker49]

How is that? Threw some roost in there. :)

(See updated image in last post)

[tants]

lookin good guys

[QuadR8cer12]

Nice I guess for a banshee!!;) :blah :macho

[phatswinn]

brian, i could seriously see shift use that, that would be a dam good ad, exept the cut up money isnt that illegal? oh well u can just say u photoshopped it on there, unless u really did

[QuadR8cer12]

LI dont think they will mind since it will be bringing money in for them;) :blah

[QuadR8cer12]

here is the winner for sure!!:macho


LOL jk I suck!!:D :rolleyes: ;)

[QuadR8cer12]

hmmmmmmm you think you coudl use a moving image??how about this:D :rolleyes:

[BrianWrightR6]

Originally posted by phatswinn
brian, i could seriously see shift use that, that would be a dam good ad, exept the cut up money isnt that illegal? oh well u can just say u photoshopped it on there, unless u really did


Just between you and me..... I thought a dollar was worth it but......SURE we can SAY that is photo shopped it in. LOL

[QuadR8cer12]

another

[QuadR8cer12]

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[MILF_HUNTER]

my word that fairy dancin spider man is a discrace to ol spidy him self. sorry dude jmo.

[JhallettEX]

Striker or Brian, give me a hand designing a tattoo for my friend, I made a post about it earlier.

[QuadR8cer12]

Originally posted by MILF_HUNTER
my word that fairy dancin spider man is a discrace to ol spidy him self. sorry dude jmo. :blah :blah :blah :macho

[SobeAHonda]

how about this.

[Davids440ex]

why did you write over Morgan Hill, California thats were i live

[BrianWrightR6]

Originally posted by Davids440ex
why did you write over Morgan Hill, California thats were i live


Because I knew you would see and it is a huge conspiracy! RUN WHILE YOU STILL CAN!!!!! LOL I don’t know, it was just random.

[Dan_Guetter]

my entry

[BrianWrightR6]

Originally posted by wiredmini
my entry


Looking good man........

[Dan_Guetter]

thanks man!

say about your design, its pretty wild!! when i was in college for conceptual art, people were doing crazy stuff like that, and you know what!? those were the people winning awards!!!!! keep up what your doing and you'll be just fine in the near future, design agencies crave stuff like yours!!!!

[BrianWrightR6]

Originally posted by wiredmini
thanks man!

say about your design, its pretty wild!! when i was in college for conceptual art, people were doing crazy stuff like that, and you know what!? those were the people winning awards!!!!! keep up what your doing and you'll be just fine in the near future, design agencies crave stuff like yours!!!!


I guess I am putting the Graphic Design degree to use for something....LOL. So from one artist to another, is there anything you see that you would add or take away. Any suggestions would be great!

[Dan_Guetter]

its looks figgin sweet!!!!

the only thing i would touch is the shift logo in the bottom left corner, make it stick out, but don't over do it.....make it look like is on paper, not the computer!!!!

[BrianWrightR6]

Originally posted by wiredmini
its looks figgin sweet!!!!

the only thing i would touch is the shift logo in the bottom left corner, make it stick out, but don't over do it.....make it look like is on paper, not the computer!!!!


Good as done thanks man. When are you going to submit yours?

[Dan_Guetter]

did already!

how long does it take for them to respond??

[Dan_Guetter]

hahahaa thats accually micro fiche of a 2001 400ex in the back ground!!! check it out!!:cool:

[BrianWrightR6]

Well I submitted mine and the next day they wrote me back. I got one of mine in the contest all ready that I am not too proud of; I just hope they will accept this new one. I have worked really hard on it.

[Dan_Guetter]

i really don't care if i win, this is just a hobbie i do in my spare time to sharpen my skills!!!!! thats why i reply to all the photoshop treads!!!! i just got all new shift gear and my bro gets all the shift stuff for free!!!!!!!!!!

[d52]

You guys do awesome work.

If you get any cool ideas for a t-shirt for Dana Creech Racing let me know. I am looking for some good ideas to put out.

[Dan_Guetter]

check you pm

i can design whatever you want! just let me know!

[D-4our]

i think striker could come up with a pretty sic design.:macho

[D-4our]

...or wired mini

[D-4our]

hey creech, hate to bug you and all but how old were you when you tried your first superman. Im gonna be tryin it soon so i could catch up with you guys in the b-squad.

[d52]

18 for first superman (that I landed clean).

[Dan_Guetter]

"18 for first superman (that I landed clean)"

LOL

i imagine a few nut busters before the money shot!

[Striker49]

Dana, Ill see what I can come up with when I get home tonight. Im sure it wont be as good as wireds, but Ill give it a shot. :)

[A4StrokeGuy]

Check out this lame excuse for an ad, i don't think i'm even going to send it to them so I don't waste there time lol:ermm:

[Doibugu2]

Originally posted by A4StrokeGuy
Check out this lame excuse for an ad, i don't think i'm even going to send it to them so I don't waste there time lol:ermm:

Dude, that is pretty cool too. If you could come up with some sort of slogan to run accross the bottom it would be sweet.

Somthing like:

Shift Gear: Built for the track not the stands

Just a thought.

[phatswinn]

Originally posted by BrianWrightR6
Just between you and me..... I thought a dollar was worth it but......SURE we can SAY that is photo shopped it in. LOL

well, "defacing" american currency is a federal affence, but hey, ur the photoshop guru, im sure you could take a picture of a doller and cut off a piece and make it look taped on something easy if the goverment decided to be an arse

its still dam cool though

[tants]

Originally posted by QuadR8cer12
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you should you those and right" SHIFT happens" that would be awesome. (like like sh*t happens) ya no? :D

[tants]

im talking about this one.. right "shift happens" :D :D :D

[A4StrokeGuy]

heres #2 i'm not very good with these things so if someone with sum talent wants to play with go ahead

[p@iNn3ck]

Heres 2 starts, weak humor, but heh

[p@iNn3ck]

or

[BrianWrightR6]

Well I submitted my final draft today. Wish me luck guys!

[DGR Designs]

wicked awesome:macho

[bluebaron]

how bout "SHIFT FMX TO THE NEXT LEVER":ermm:

[bluebaron]

heres my sorry excuse for a entyr but it think im giong to do it over and sent it in:confused2

[QuadR8cer12]

Originally posted by tants
im talking about this one.. right "shift happens" :D :D :D lol yeah:rolleyes:

[xXx*PREDATOR*xXx]

I couldn't get much closer....now I juss need a catchy phrase

[QuadR8cer12]

HERE YA GO TANTS!!!

[zzbudzz]

rough draft what do ya'll think?

[QuadR8cer12]

Nivce but make him be doing trick

[Davids440ex]

Originally posted by QuadR8cer12
HERE YA GO TANTS!!!

using Jason Anderson Picture landing on jumbo jack