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ravage3000
05-26-2009, 02:01 PM
.. what did I do wrong? What needs improvement?

http://markgoodwinphotography.smugmug.com/photos/546008423_X6iYK-X2.jpg

http://markgoodwinphotography.smugmug.com/photos/546008587_2QaAo-X2.jpg

http://markgoodwinphotography.smugmug.com/photos/546008391_DU25p-X2.jpg

http://markgoodwinphotography.smugmug.com/photos/546012082_pjjYY-X2.jpg

http://markgoodwinphotography.smugmug.com/photos/546011713_poVGH-X2.jpg
Pappy
05-26-2009, 02:26 PM
I could nit pick, but a major improvement for you!!!
kawabunga
05-26-2009, 02:44 PM
No picture will ever be PERFECT in everyone's eyes. I think you did a very nice job. Keep up the good work!
ravage3000
05-26-2009, 03:08 PM
Originally posted by Pappy
I could nit pick, but a major improvement for you!!!

Pick away.
Pappy
05-26-2009, 03:19 PM
I would watch the tint in post work, bring up some of the shadows in the backlit shots (add back some contrast) When ever dust is present, any shift with saturation or edit work will stand out in that dust. A color boost here or there will need to be addressed in the dust.

The last shot is a touch bright, could use a simple tweak with a curve, add some contrast and desat the red a touch.

The reds and dirt are much better then most images you have previously posted....just keep shooting and keep picking yourself apart! Thats what it takes to keep improving!
meankfx
05-26-2009, 05:56 PM
Nice pics!