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90cc DAD
03-11-2009, 05:10 PM
My son came home and had to make
a poem for school with a picture.
This is what he came up with!!
I liked it so much... I thought you
guys would enjoy it too??


http://i346.photobucket.com/albums/p422/Tylersdad95y/Poem.jpg
03-11-2009, 05:12 PM
wow thats really good.
dbc112
03-11-2009, 05:25 PM
Here was one of mine written on a notepad kept in the john.. I had 3 brothers.



Ohhh... Ahhhh... err... kaplunk. Boy my @ss can kick some funk



--Socraps--
416exfreak
03-11-2009, 05:26 PM
Your son's is great!

And that one that you posted DBC.. even though in good humor, is a bit much...

We can read that at the local 7/11...
90cc DAD
03-11-2009, 05:31 PM
He had to use 4 of the five sences.
IMAGERY POEM
He is 13 in 8th grade...
What would you guys grade it??
416exfreak
03-11-2009, 05:34 PM
Honestly, I would give him a B+.

To be 13, it seems like it lacks some imagination, and sensory words. But it's still a good poem. I guess im a little harsher b/c they have me in Honors classes, so im used to being graded harder than most kids...:(
powermadd400ex
03-11-2009, 06:21 PM
i say a A- or B+
its an awesome poem
03-11-2009, 06:22 PM
Originally posted by 416exfreak
Honestly, I would give him a B+.

To be 13, it seems like it lacks some imagination, and sensory words. But it's still a good poem. I guess im a little harsher b/c they have me in Honors classes, so im used to being graded harder than most kids...:(


dude 13 years old? h3ll i was impressed
90cc DAD
03-11-2009, 06:44 PM
Originally posted by mxcowboy
dude 13 years old? h3ll i was impressed


Thanks cowboy!!
I showed him this response and now he thinks he might get an "A"
csr250r
03-11-2009, 07:41 PM
Thats pretty sweet.

Haha he prolly has the ladies standing in line.
justen08
03-11-2009, 07:53 PM
that was real good i give you an A buddy
meankfx
03-12-2009, 03:15 PM
Thats a good poem. Wish I could have thought of one like that when I was a kid. I would give him an A.
BlaineKaiser450
03-12-2009, 03:50 PM
the poems cool! so is the picture!
90cc DAD
03-12-2009, 04:03 PM
Hi this is Tyler.
Thank you all for posting comments on my poem!
My dad said he was going to put it on here and I was
excited to see what everyone thought my grade would be!
I will let you guys know what grade I get!
I hope it gets me an A. I don't care if it is an A+ or A-
I read all the comments you post.
Thanks again.
Tyler Young 95Y
dbc112
03-12-2009, 04:58 PM
My bad, that was on a 6 beer load last night... take it back.

BTW, very nice poem, well illustrated
90cc DAD
03-13-2009, 07:09 PM
Not to worry.
We have all been there!!
Thanks for commenting my sons Poem!!
90cc DAD
03-24-2009, 06:46 PM
Just wanted to let everyone know My son got
an A- on the poem!!

WTG Tyler!!
Great Job!!
justen08
03-24-2009, 07:17 PM
good job tyler it was a good poem