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Golden Joker
02-19-2005, 11:05 PM
i am trying to make a resume and send it into fox racing. Can you help me revise/make changes/etc..plz?


heres my resume so far! I think it is pretty solid except there needs to be a good opener.

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I was wanting a reliable and high quality sponsorship to help with riding gear expenses. I was hoping that I could get a certain percent off of your products. In return I will put Fox Racing stickers on my quad and advertise Fox Racing as much as possible.

I am 14 and currently go to Platteview Middle School in Nebraska. I am in 8th grade and will be turning 15 this September. Next School year I will be going to Platteview Jr/Sr High.

I have been riding in my backyard practice track for about 8 years and finally my father has decided to take my brother and I racing. I will be racing atvs at White Sands Raceway in Ashland, Nebraska and possibly at a track in Friend, Nebraska.

I hope you can consider this offer even though I haven’t started racing yet (at least I am honest). If I do get this sponsorship I will keep in mind that I work for you, you don’t work for me.

CannondaleRider
02-19-2005, 11:45 PM
Just as a warning, I doubt they would consider it because you don't have any wins.

Get some wins under your belt and then send it(no offence or anything, just letting you know)

This (http://www.douggust.com/content/AskPages_2/resume.htm) and this (http://www.douggust.com/content/AskPages/resume.htm) may help

kenwoodjeff
02-19-2005, 11:47 PM
This might help ya
1Racing Resume (http://acracing.com/site/page.cfm?PageID=41)