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trick450r
10-31-2004, 02:47 PM
Ok i have a HW assignment due tomarrow...i have to write a poem or monolouge about selling out or greed...please help!
Scott-300ex
10-31-2004, 02:54 PM
i was greedy
because i was needy



continue boys
chucked
10-31-2004, 03:23 PM
so i asked the guys
on exriders to advise
theTman
10-31-2004, 03:27 PM
i got no answers
it wasnt very nice
trick450r
10-31-2004, 03:27 PM
man you guys suck...i jut finsished the entire thing in five minutes...

Selling out/ Greed


„« Selling out, trading who you are for who you want to be
„« Money and material items is all you want to see
„« These two words do not describe me

„« Greed is just seeking what you need
„« It usually starts with one little seed
„« It causes some people to make others bleed

„« Some people classify others as greedy
„« In reality all they are is needy

„« Greed is a force that takes people by storm
„« In some peoples case it can become a norm

„« For me earning my way is a matter of pride
„« Greedy people are lazy
„« They wont take that extra stride


:macho :huh :blah: :devil: :eek2: :D
chucked
10-31-2004, 03:33 PM
sounds good!
theTman
10-31-2004, 03:38 PM
what was wrong with ours:(
YFZ450Ridr
10-31-2004, 03:39 PM
damn man thats actually pretty good
I-7
10-31-2004, 04:18 PM
Originally posted by trick450r
man you guys suck...i jut finsished the entire thing in five minutes...

Selling out/ Greed


„« Selling out, trading who you are for who you want to be
„« Money and material items is all you want to see
„« These two words do not describe me

„« Greed is just seeking what you need
„« It usually starts with one little seed
„« It causes some people to make others bleed

„« Some people classify others as greedy
„« In reality all they are is needy

„« Greed is a force that takes people by storm
„« In some peoples case it can become a norm

„« For me earning my way is a matter of pride
„« Greedy people are lazy
„« They wont take that extra stride


:macho :huh :blah: :devil: :eek2: :D


Its good but theres no rhyme scheme or patter... does your teacher care about that?
YFZ450Ridr
10-31-2004, 04:25 PM
Originally posted by I-7
Its good but theres no rhyme scheme or patter... does your teacher care about that?

no rhyme?!?! every stanza has a rhyme in it.
cheetah
10-31-2004, 04:53 PM
Originally posted by theTman
what was wrong with ours:(

Well he couldn't use it because they knew something would be up. They just know he's not capable of high class, intellectual literature.:o
I-7
10-31-2004, 05:22 PM
Originally posted by 250EXridr
no rhyme?!?! every stanza has a rhyme in it.

No read the word after I said rhyme...

his poem goes:

AAA, BBB, CC, DD, EFE


Im not trying to critisize it... its good but I just dont know if your teacher required a pattern

ex.

AA, BB / ABAB, DCDC
trick450r
10-31-2004, 05:47 PM
no it doesn't need a pattern...it doesn't even have to rhyme....yeh ima get an A+...
YFZ450Ridr
10-31-2004, 07:21 PM
Originally posted by I-7
No read the word after I said rhyme...

his poem goes:

AAA, BBB, CC, DD, EFE


Im not trying to critisize it... its good but I just dont know if your teacher required a pattern

ex.

AA, BB / ABAB, DCDC

oh i see exactly what you mean now.
11-01-2004, 05:08 AM
Originally posted by I-7
No read the word after I said rhyme...

his poem goes:

AAA, BBB, CC, DD, EFE


Im not trying to critisize it... its good but I just dont know if your teacher required a pattern

ex.

AA, BB / ABAB, DCDC looks like we have a poem engineer on exriders :ermm: